For
those of you who have read She Belongs to
Me, you may have heard there’s a spin-off to the romantic-suspense
bestseller. Though there aren’t really any spoilers, you can bypass this excerpt and read more about the first book here.
Also, if you’ve read my novels, you know that I deal with a lot of real-life scenarios, some of which we don’t like, but they still exist. I do not, however, go into any graphic detail…I simply attempt for the reader to feel the character’s thoughts—good and bad. That said, welcome to the second eight sentences of Split Decisions.
Also, if you’ve read my novels, you know that I deal with a lot of real-life scenarios, some of which we don’t like, but they still exist. I do not, however, go into any graphic detail…I simply attempt for the reader to feel the character’s thoughts—good and bad. That said, welcome to the second eight sentences of Split Decisions.
If
you missed last week’s excerpt, click here first. There’s a link that will bring you
right back.
Excerpt:
The world stopped shaking for a moment, but
then she felt herself soaring through the air, landing with a thud, and then
the room went black. When she opened her eyes, her father’s arms surrounded her, warm
and strong. "No one will hurt you, C.J., never again, I promise."
She
wanted to believe him, wanted to believe it was possible, but the crushing, the
pain, she could still feel it.
Within seconds of his assertion, she found
herself in another time and place, running across the yard. "No, Daddy,
don't do it! You promised nobody would ever hurt me!"
Too late, she’d arrived a day too late.
Too late, she’d arrived a day too late.
Split Decisions
will be available this spring! So if you haven’t read She Belongs to Me, read on.
According to readers, the
first novel, She Belongs to Me, is a sensual and gripping read
that will have you falling in love and wondering if you can trust anyone right
up to the last page.
After secrets
and a mysterious background leave a wife’s life hanging by a thread, a husband
must look for answers in the only place he knows—the past.
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Belongs to Me:
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next time, happy reading!
Carmen
DeSousa
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Very gripping. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anne. I tried to give only a little bit. I hate when children are in pain, but sadly, it's a reality.
DeleteSo intense. Nice excerpt.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Elaine. Yes, very intense. As sad as it is, our past are a part of us. So even though they're sad, I feel they are needed. We appreciate our 'happily ever after' when we have to fight for it. :)
DeleteOh my!!! HURRY!!! I have to have this book!!!
ReplyDeleteLOL, Terry! And we're only sixteen sentences in. Of course, you probably remember that story from book one. Sad that she has to relive it, but you'll see why next week. Wait to be shocked, starting with sentence number seventeen. I'm so excited about this book too. It's my second book...even though publishing fifth. And it's always been my beta readers and my favorite. :)
DeleteDramatic, intriguing, you made me feel her pain, excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteAnd that's a good thing, right? I think I wrote that for another author's review... "Love when I feel passion and pain."
DeleteHope you'll stop back next week...I think you'll like it, especially since you read 'She Belongs to Me'. :)
Excellent snippet, as always!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ann. Loved yours...very descriptive. :)
DeleteA great and emotional snippet. The last sentence is one that completely guts... a day too late. :(
ReplyDeleteI know...isn't that horrible? Poor girl. I'm so mean to my characters.
DeleteReal grabber!
ReplyDeleteKudos!
Thank you, Frank! I appreciate the feedback. :)
DeleteHow terribly sad!
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry, Kate. But I did warn you. :( I hate that I have to start with tragedy, but I honestly think it reveals why my characters are the way they are. Next week is distressing, but not sad so to speak. I hope you'll come back. :)
DeleteImmediately gripping, Carmen.It pulled me into her situation--and I felt her fear--terror even, and her confusion. Nice snippet. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Teresa. I'm so pleased you enjoyed the excerpt. It's hard to know how much to share as you know, hoping the reader will understand. :)
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